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So I had to do this short story challenge with given words, them being (and yes, things had capitals or no capitals for a reason):

the eye
the old man
dull blue
gasped for breath

We only had ten minutes to complete this task, mine might not be the best, but I feel like other people could have done better in my English class. So, without anymore speaking, this is what I wrote:

He gasped for breath, he could feel his heart beating louder in his slashed chest. Darkness surrounded the man and his neighbour, there was a loud sound of closing shutters off in the distance where he and his neighbour could see a dull blue light of a Tavern sign. "It seems the madmen have lost us." The man exclaimed, starting to jog off towards the light. "For now.." The neighbour mumbled under his breath as he began to follow. The sudden silence that filled the street was terrifying, and too their horror, the sounds of thundering boots of the villains were closing in, seemingly in all directions. It didn't take long before the two men were surrounded by man, ruffled looking madmen. "You've done it this time, Chap." The neighbour stood there shuddering in fear as he squeaked out his words. The eye of the old man, who had pushed himself past the others, was looking wildly at the two men. Within a sudden motion, blood splattered over the cool damp ground. And then they were gone, vanishing back into the cover of the darkness.

Now, it was hard to include all of the given words in just ten minutes. I'd love to do this again, but of course with new words and as much time as I can get. I honestly love the plot I made, of course, I love dark, twisted and eerie stories.


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RoochArffer Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the fave =]
Cheshire-Luna Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ welcome~ You're a awesome artist ouo
RoochArffer Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! :hug:
LuckyRyo May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank ye for the fave :iconiloveyouplz:
Cheshire-Luna May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;u; you're most certainly welcome~
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